Thought time is unbelievable the increase in commercials spots in our world. Everywhere you are going to see a commercial logo in front of your way. In an article "Hype" written by Kalle Lasn talks about how America's view is totally figured out with logos or any product message, where is very difficult find a place without these spot where our eyes could get a rest.
I totally agree in what the writer says in the article, is really difficult to find a place where your eyes could get a little rest of all these commercial spots. It is incredible how our world every day is getting worst, everywhere that you go there are commercial spots that your eyes are going to read . Also, if you are watching TV, all that kind of commercials where most of them do not give people a good advised to take from them.
I need to try to write more at the first draft, find the main point of the article and don't try to do it perfect the first time because my brain get block and i can't write my ideas.
ReplyDeleteCarolina-- I agree with you: one important issue to work on is the length of your answers. As you said, the answer is to write without trying to get it perfect right away--good observation.
ReplyDeleteWe will have to work on your grammar and word choice, as your first language is interfering a bit. But you already made a good first step by changing the language in your blog from Spanish to English. :-)
You did not say what you did well, however. I think the way you refer to the author and title of the article is right on the spot, for instance. Anything else you like?